Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Introductory Paragraph (Power) - The Notebook by Nicholas Sparks
Abraham Lincoln once said "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." This means although all men can handle some hardship or struggle, too tell if a man has true character, give them power and see what follows. This is right because regardless of how much bad happens to a person, that doesn't define their character. This can be clearly seen in in Nicholas Spark's novel The Notebook. Noah shows that his hardship doesn't defeat him and his true character when he continues to try and help Allie remember, being there for Allie after she broke his heart, and staying by Allie's side despite the disrespect and mistreatment of her parents.
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there are no mistakes on yours on ascale of 1 to 10 its a 9
ReplyDeletethis page is slightly good but in theory its horrible. i dont know why i kept reading it. i was so close to barfing comprehending this abomination. its in the correct order but all i have to give is advice and u should not consider being a female author. it doesnt use first person but it seem this is the only thing you accomplished.
ReplyDeleteIn my point of view this seems like a good Introductory Paragraph. You don't use 1st person, and all your sentences are well done. Your three points are very clear and make you understand what the book is leading up too. Well done!
ReplyDeleteno mistakes. good thesis, not in first person, good
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